Comments on: Weekend Almostsentences

By: mr budd

mr budd — Mon, 29 Jun 2009 17:26:23 +0000

bitter lettuce, but Gladys did
as we all have done, the wrankling avocado
and the frantic moon that Mabel saw
–she saw she saw–she said
the puckered tomato of the second stair
turned
a better leaf and the doubting kale
crushed shall be as a beginning
saleh, saleh
yo!

By: David

David — Mon, 29 Jun 2009 03:20:30 +0000

are these fragments semi-random extractions from longer things you’ve written? i wonder?

By: David

David — Mon, 29 Jun 2009 03:19:42 +0000

My disseration was on increasing the protein content of the Wamo tribe’s bitter lettuce, but Gladys did hers on 19th century French place settings.

By: S. Le

S. Le — Sun, 28 Jun 2009 13:34:39 +0000

“There was a mouse in the trap. I could have had the mouse, but I preferred the cheese.”

“There was no news today, except for Michael Jackson.”

By: Duckworth Peslar

Duckworth Peslar — Sun, 28 Jun 2009 04:17:01 +0000

But I preferred the cheese instead of the cat o’nine tails.

Vladimir chose the bitter lettuce, but Gladys did not partake preferring the legumes.

Most preferred to be sanguine about the matter except for Michael Jackson.

Just who was that Amazon – anyone? No, that was my personal trainer.

Did you see Potzo and Lucky? To which Estragon replied in a whisper, “I saw them.”

By: Dennis the Vizsla

Dennis the Vizsla — Sat, 27 Jun 2009 20:21:47 +0000

Hmm, I guess I can’t finish the last one since I wrote it originally — that would be cheating!

“Who can tell me what regions are drained by the Amazon — anyone? Anyone? Bueller? Bueller?”